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He's not one to want to get involved in such things, but he's certainly not cruel, and he goes to where he needs to be
He does, yeah. Without meaning to, or even wanting to for the most part. And even towards the very end, there was a part of him that still didn't want to because of being so afraid of intimacy and love. He knew what was the right thing to do, but he never always went about doing it the right way.
Cuddy said some horrible things about Eva, but you had her say them in such a way that she didn't come off as a monster
I am going to write a 'synopsis/commentary' on this fic and talk about stuff like this, as well as lots of other facets of this story. But yes. This. She hated herself for saying the things she did, and she hated how out her control those feelings were. She knew she wasn't supposed to feel that way. And that's exactly what it's like. You see this child you know you're supposed to love and you just can't and you don't know why. Postpartum depression is a really awful, awful thing to go through.
Thanks so much for slogging through all 35K words, AND for coming back to give a second round of feedback. I appreciate it so much. I'm thrilled you liked the story!
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He's not one to want to get involved in such things, but he's certainly not cruel, and he goes to where he needs to be
He does, yeah. Without meaning to, or even wanting to for the most part. And even towards the very end, there was a part of him that still didn't want to because of being so afraid of intimacy and love. He knew what was the right thing to do, but he never always went about doing it the right way.
Cuddy said some horrible things about Eva, but you had her say them in such a way that she didn't come off as a monster
I am going to write a 'synopsis/commentary' on this fic and talk about stuff like this, as well as lots of other facets of this story. But yes. This. She hated herself for saying the things she did, and she hated how out her control those feelings were. She knew she wasn't supposed to feel that way. And that's exactly what it's like. You see this child you know you're supposed to love and you just can't and you don't know why. Postpartum depression is a really awful, awful thing to go through.
Thanks so much for slogging through all 35K words, AND for coming back to give a second round of feedback. I appreciate it so much. I'm thrilled you liked the story!