Okay, I need to comment again with something more substantial this time. :)
I think you got House's thought and dialogue processes down perfectly. You certainly captured his "weapons of mass deflection." He's not one to want to get involved in such things, but he's certainly not cruel, and he goes to where he needs to be. And Cuddy needed him to be there.
I like that you didn't shy away from the raw, devastating effects of postpartum depression. Cuddy said some horrible things about Eva, but you had her say them in such a way that she didn't come off as a monster.
When I have time, I'm going to go back and read it again. It was just that awesome.
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I think you got House's thought and dialogue processes down perfectly. You certainly captured his "weapons of mass deflection." He's not one to want to get involved in such things, but he's certainly not cruel, and he goes to where he needs to be. And Cuddy needed him to be there.
I like that you didn't shy away from the raw, devastating effects of postpartum depression. Cuddy said some horrible things about Eva, but you had her say them in such a way that she didn't come off as a monster.
When I have time, I'm going to go back and read it again. It was just that awesome.